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Occasionally, I explore public websites for translations that could be improved. See samples below for comparison.

Source text:

Unsere Women in Business Serie ist eine Eventreihe, die sich auf den beruflichen Erfolg von Frauen konzentriert. Das ganze Jahr über veranstalten wir mehrere Events für Frauen und bieten ihnen die Möglichkeit sich mit Gleichgesinnten auszutauschen.

Existing translation:

Our women In business event series focuses on the occupational success of women. All year long we host events for women and offer them the opportunity to exchange ideas with like-minded people.

My translation:

"Women in Business" is a series of events focused on women's professional success. Throughout the year, we host several women-centric events offering the opportunity to share ideas with people of similar interests.